31 March 2008 @ 11:11 pm
Sense Drabbles, PG, BillxTom  
Title: Sense Drabbles
Author:
[livejournal.com profile] paraboobizarre
Pairing(s): BillxTom
Rating:
PG
Disclaimer:
The characters used herein are fictional representations of real people and the actions and situations contained in the fics are no reflection on the real people on which they are based. All characters engaging in sexual acts of any kind are over 18 years of age. I do not believe anything of this ever happened, nor that it should and I do not make any money of this. It's fiction.
Warnings: none
Summary: One drabble for each sense, smell, taste, sight, hear and touch
Author's notes:
It started with the smell drabble, mainly because the last thing is true for a very good friend of mine and I somehow felt compelled to write that down. The other four senses kinda snuck up on me :)

Smell

There were many fantastic places to bury his nose in. The soft skin in the hollow of his brother's elbow, the dark warmth behind the shell of his ear, the trail of curly hair from his brother's navel to his groin, the scent changing from soapy clean to a heavy, musky sweetness.
Arguably the best place though, was the collar of Bill's jacket. Expensive perfume, hints of lemons, cedar, faint traces of smoke and the slight plastic whiff of impregnation spray. The tip of his nose right in the indention of Bill's collar bones – the best place in the world.



Touch

Darkness is best because it reduces their world to what brushes against their fingertips. Skin against skin is so much more exciting when there's no sight to distract them. The fine ripple of muscles, the way everything gets warmer when his hand slips further down, tiny hairs prickling at his fingertip when he runs his finger against the grain, down there, where Tom shaves...and the way it's suddenly smooth again when he changes directions.
It's all smothering warmth and soft skin, it's dry lips blowing a kiss against his eyelids and the tickle of matted hair. And it's dark.



Taste

There are days when the kisses taste like caramel, that luscious rich taste, so heavy he can almost feel it sitting on his tongue even long after the kiss ended. Then there are days where they never have time and it's only little pecks that desperately try to become real kisses but always fall short. Those taste like Juicy Fruit Grapermelon and cherry cola.
BerryBurst kisses are his favourite though. They only ever happen in the mornings or evenings, in those few minutes after Bill brushed his teeth and he still taste like toothpaste, berries and mint, all squeaky clean.



Hearing

It is constant static, an eternal well of white noise that accompanies him wherever he goes, who's been with him ever since he can remember. There were probably only ten minutes in his life where the steady chattering was not with him and at that time he was too shocked by the “miracle” of birth to appreciate it.
Bill's voice is best not when it's up to chit-chat speed and volume but when it's deep and hushed, whispering into his ear. That subdued murmuring, tantalizingly low, breathy and a bit ragged at the edges, when he's muttering his name.



Sight

From between lowered lids he watches, all afternoon long, chronicling the lazy trek of the sun across his twin's shoulders, down his chest over his belly to those narrow hips; the swirling pattern of light and dark over the blue hibiscus flower print. The way the fine hairs on his arms bleach to a light blond in the sun, golden down straying across his forearm.
Rubbing at his belly, sighing, Bill leaves a tumble of sand on his skin. The sand corns glitter in the sun, white and shiny like crystals and Tom watches more of the afternoon slip by.
 
 
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[identity profile] yaoisex.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
Lovely! I love sweet Drabbles! :D
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)))
[identity profile] x-nannerl-x.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
*snuggles with Bill* <3____<3
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:42 pm (UTC)
oh my! can totally relate though :P
♥♥♥
[identity profile] lirren.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:43 pm (UTC)
Awww, those were lovely!
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you *hugs* so glad to hear you like it ♥♥♥
[identity profile] titacats.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
Beautifully done. ♥
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 09:55 pm (UTC)
awww thank you *hugs you really hard*
♥♥♥
[identity profile] sagittariusgirl.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 10:08 pm (UTC)
perfectly done. totally loved the Hearing one best!
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 10:19 pm (UTC)
thank you :) it's nice to know which one people like best *hugs*
[identity profile] fangirl-07.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 10:28 pm (UTC)
Oh I don't know which one I like best... I like the descriptions of smell and touch very much, but hearing is very clever ;)
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
hehe thank you :D My fave is really the smell but the hearing one is kinda cute as well
[identity profile] haylzee.livejournal.com on March 31st, 2008 11:33 pm (UTC)
<33333333333333 I'm going to hug you soon, for reeeeal. :)
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 06:51 am (UTC)
Gawd, yesss! I'm so excited haha though I will prolly have major troubles understanding you guys XD
[identity profile] ma-chelle.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
Mmm, I loved this! It has that sort of dreamy quality to it, like bits and pieces of feelings that float along on a gentle breeze. Always so nice to see writing from you! :)
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 06:53 am (UTC)
your comments are always like little fics of their own *hugs* thanks so much for the sweet comment, glad to hear you enjoyed it ♥♥♥
[identity profile] astridgorky.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 02:45 am (UTC)
weeeeee sooooo gooooood!
i am over stimulated now.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 06:53 am (UTC)
ooooh thank you ;)
[identity profile] strssna.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 04:55 am (UTC)
All my senses seem super sensitive right now, and I almost feel like I had sex. These two lovelies are so easy on all senses, such a sweet idea this series of drabbles :)
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 06:59 am (UTC)
Weeeee thanks for the lovely comment ♥♥♥ so glad you enjoyed reading it *hugs*
[identity profile] rikke-leonhart.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:39 am (UTC)
Ah, such lovely words from you again :)
I finally got the time to properly read something and this is what I see! Amazing.

It was so warm, as if they're in this cocoon of warmth that we can see and feel but never enter. They're so beautiful when you write them.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:54 am (UTC)
awww thank you so much for that sweet comment! I grew like an inch or so reading this *hugs*
♥♥♥
[identity profile] chayenne7.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 09:39 am (UTC)
These are simply brilliant. There has ever been only one other fic in the whole fandom that made me feel like this after reading it and I thought it would never happen again. It did. It's sensory overload which is embedded in the peaceful routine of everyday life. I really envy them for the world you have put them in.
Again: simply brilliant.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 12:28 pm (UTC)
OMG Wow! Epic praise *squishes you* thank so much ♥♥♥

Now I really want to read that other fic though! Share?
:)
[identity profile] chayenne7.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 02:46 pm (UTC)
You have read it too :) It's Raspberry Season.
Can you see the connection now?
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:10 pm (UTC)
OH WOW! Ummm...epic praise² ♥♥♥
[identity profile] emseviltwin.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 01:11 pm (UTC)
Just got a chance to read this and I wish I could leave a better comment then just to tell you that it is amazing. But it is. <3
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 01:13 pm (UTC)
awww thanks so much <333
[identity profile] 6why-me9.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 02:02 pm (UTC)
Love this.^^
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:08 pm (UTC)
thank you!

OMG is that a Flocke icon?! *glomps*
[identity profile] 6why-me9.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
Yes, it is. It's the same picture as this. ->

Image (http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v702/Sara_Hodges/?action=view&current=Knutwargesternklein.jpg)

This poster is hanging in Nürnberg at the train station and at bus stops etc. The text says "Knut was yesterday". It's a bit mean but I don't really care about anything but that cute little white babybear anyway.^^
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:50 pm (UTC)
awww that is so cute! and pink on top of that *swoons*

And I'm Austrian haha so I can actually read the text but thanks for the translation anyways XD
[identity profile] 6why-me9.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
Lol..oh, ok. Didn't know that.^^

[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 1st, 2008 07:57 pm (UTC)
it's okay ;)
[identity profile] icemint.livejournal.com on April 2nd, 2008 06:16 am (UTC)
I've missed you. Your writing makes me feel like I'm floating on a cotton cloud. <3
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on April 2nd, 2008 03:10 pm (UTC)
awww thank you *hugs*

I miss you too! We never manage to catch each other online anymore :(
[identity profile] icemint.livejournal.com on April 2nd, 2008 04:10 pm (UTC)
maybe because I'm sleeping earlier now xD
well, hopefully we will one day! I've seen you online, but your setting is usually on "away." how have you been?
[identity profile] aelilim.livejournal.com on December 3rd, 2008 06:08 pm (UTC)
Hi! I love your writting~

Can you give your permission to translate all your drabbles to spanish? I'll give all the credits if you let me, of course. ^^
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on December 3rd, 2008 06:11 pm (UTC)
That's really nice and I appreciate the compliment but I do not want any of my fics translated.

I know I cannot stop you from doing it but I'd appreciate if you would respect my stance on that :)
[identity profile] aelilim.livejournal.com on December 3rd, 2008 06:37 pm (UTC)
I won't do it if you don't want to, don't worry. :)

Thanks anyway.