08 November 2007 @ 02:40 am
Drabble: Tour de Force  
Author: [personal profile] paraboobizarre
Title:
Tour de Force
Pairing: BillxTom
Rating: Duh...it's suggestive, rather so...so how do I rate that? R, maybe?
Disclaimer: The characters used herein are fictional representations of real people and the actions and situations contained in the fics are no reflection on the real people on which they are based. All characters engaging in sexual acts of any kind are over 18 years of age. I do not believe anything of this ever happened, nor that it should and I do not make any money of this. It's fiction.
Summary: It's a drabble.
AN: Damn my sleeping patterns...I slept too much over the day and now I realized it's almost 3 am and I'm not tired, hence ze drabble.
I've never written one before, was actually quite a lot of fun.


 

It's okay because his brother likes to be forced. Loves the pain. So when it's the pleading and the whimpers, the sobs and the gasping, it's okay. It feels so much better, plunging into that heat, when there's resistance. The biting and scratching. It's like electricity, sparking between them, little flames licking away at their insides. His twin's skin like soaked silk, smooth with sweat and slipping against him. It's okay when he ignores all the obvious signs that this might just be something not both of them want. It's okay, really, because Tom loves to be forced. Loves him.

 

 
 
Current Music: watching Heroes
Current Mood: bouncy
 
 
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[identity profile] nimfaeriel.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:08 am (UTC)
mwuuah, much love baby ♥
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:42 am (UTC)
Thank you <3
[identity profile] ayaneva.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:18 am (UTC)
BWAH! The ending WINS. Tom?! I didn't see that coming at all.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:42 am (UTC)
Glad you liked it :D
[identity profile] lirren.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:20 am (UTC)
Ooh, whoa! That was a twist I didn't expect! And oh my god, the ANGST. You kill me. You've really been just ripping my heart out lately!!! ;_;
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:41 am (UTC)
You've really been just ripping my heart out lately!!! ;_;
And I'm starting to really feel sorry for doing so - can I blame it on my new medication?!
XD

Thanks for the comment though :) I believe something obnoxiously sweet and fluffy is in order soon...
[identity profile] emseviltwin.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:23 am (UTC)
skin soaked silk, smooth with sweat

*kills*
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:37 am (UTC)
you noticed! *glomps*

My fave part of this entire drabble, the little s-parade ;)
[identity profile] emseviltwin.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:49 am (UTC)
Whooo! *feels smart*

seriously, best line.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:58 am (UTC)
HAHAHA I'm really shoving it into everyone's face by the end of the sentence but it just reads so rawr!
;)
*hugs*
[identity profile] mnschoen.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:33 am (UTC)
LODMFHENA8WYQE
[identity profile] mnschoen.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 03:34 am (UTC)
Bill on top.

Marry me.

Please, good lord, marry me, or make this into a big ficlet so I can die happy.
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:36 am (UTC)
I take it you quite liked that one LOL

I don't believe in marriage and we'll see if that ever turns into a big one but ja, never say never ;)

Thanks for the comment(s) :)))
[identity profile] mnschoen.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 07:05 pm (UTC)
I don't believe in marriage

You just turned into my hero times a billion.

That said, I may or may not have stolen the idea and worked on fic with it. Do you mind?
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 07:09 pm (UTC)
That said, I may or may not have stolen the idea and worked on fic with it. Do you mind?

God, jesus no! It's an honor, if anything :)
Can't wait to see what you make of it *hugs*
[identity profile] sugarsnapy.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 04:52 am (UTC)
yay. someone that makes me dreams come true~
i love toppy Bill :D

It seems like there's a 100:1 ratio of toppy T to B? Poo
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:32 am (UTC)
It seems like there's a 100:1 ratio of toppy T to B? Poo

Oh yes! Bill just needs to be written top more often :D
Thanks for the comment - glad you liked it!
[identity profile] sugarsnapy.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:48 pm (UTC)
nonono..thank youuu! :D
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 08:49 pm (UTC)
*hugs*
[identity profile] maiwen05.livejournal.com on November 14th, 2007 08:33 am (UTC)
Oh yes! Bill just needs to be written top more often :D

Sooo....what are you waiting for? ;)

And what's this I hear about a more explicit top!Bill? We'll be seeing that little bit of lovely soon, right? Right?!....Please? :D
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 14th, 2007 08:44 am (UTC)
Funny that you should ask: my computer died on me a couple of days ago and I just got him back...minus all those little ficlets of course, since I never deemed those important enought to actually save them in some form or other :-/

But never fear, some people actually have that particular scene because I let them read it before.
So I guess it's only a matter of time before I have the better part of my fics back again.
:)

Patience though...
[identity profile] x-nannerl-x.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 09:11 am (UTC)
Well, once you showed me this or something similair, I can't quite remember, I'm still too sleepy,lol. I don't know if you remember my reaction, but you told me I was sick,lol. So yeah <3333 XD
Ich liebe dich btw :P
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 09:15 am (UTC)
LOL I showed you something completely different, but still with Bill on top haha
and that back then was a lot more explicit :D

*cuddles the sleepy sam* love you too, babe <33
[identity profile] queendaeva.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 11:55 am (UTC)
i couldn't sleep either last night ;)

so this surely is short, but very intense:o also i'm used to reading fics that don't tell me the perspective at first (not on purpose!damn), so i was kinda on to you that this would end up differently from convention ;) (meaning: i'm sure you did that on purpose to confuse the reader:p)
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 12:34 pm (UTC)
LOL I had to do it haha what's the fun with squeezing a scene into a 100 words when you're letting it end according to most people's expections?!
The problem of course, working with a repertoire of two people, even the twists become conventional XD
[identity profile] lipaeiou123.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 01:18 pm (UTC)
What can I say? BILL ON TOP!!!!YEAAAHHHHH!!!!
[identity profile] paraboobizarre.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2007 07:09 pm (UTC)
haha glad you liked it!
*hugs*
[identity profile] jade-327.livejournal.com on November 9th, 2007 09:23 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD.

Are you trying to get me to write again? Lol You little devil, you.
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[identity profile] hyper-sama.livejournal.com on November 16th, 2007 04:44 am (UTC)

It's like electricity, sparking between them, little flames licking away at their insides.
o_O I can totally see that for some reason.

Tom's masochistic, Bill's topping.
<333 I love it when he's on top.
Ha, you totally made my...uh, night XD
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[identity profile] jeanne8917.livejournal.com on January 15th, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC)
wow xD this drab is perfect!:3 U know that i love it?:P The end is awsome ;P Tom? - great idea, b/c all time I thought it's Bill ^^ xD Like other people, I guess :P

All the best!:P
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