LOL! I just read this. And you got me all the way, until Bill started to take off his necklace in the van. And even then I was going, "No... it can't be..."
I loved the way you got Bill's nervousness pegged, and Tom's sloppy eating - so boyish! *squishes*
Great stuff!
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